Daisy returns from her shooting the sky photo shoot and begins printing photos and paging through her photo album.
First shoe dropped. The second shoe will drop next month when Daisy meets a mysterious stranger and her adventure begins in full.
I’ve avoided using words within the story, but the central mystery is complex enough that I finally had to throw a few of them in there.
One wall I’m now banging up against is that I really want something more like a comic book format where you can easily add small panels together and define the flow in a more naturalistic way. I’m just accepting that that’s one skill too many at the moment, but it seems to be what the adventure needs to be less clunky in the storytelling.
A question to those that are following. Did today’s adventure make sense? Does it make clear where Daisy’s journey is going to take her?
October 17, 2016 at 4:24 pm
I think Daisy is the toddler? Nonna is her grandmother? Her mother is missing from the picture? I love the way you are doing this, by the way. I’m inspired to try something similar and am also grappling with how much text to add or whether to just use photos, so I’ll be following with interest.
October 17, 2016 at 4:44 pm
Ding Ding Ding! 🙂 yes, exactly. I was hoping it wasn’t getting so dense that it was hard to follow. I’d love to see what you’re working on when you’re ready to share
October 18, 2016 at 3:26 am
Yes, it’s absolutely clear, much text isn’t necessary in this case. An interesting story, and the pictures are great, I love how you did the newspaper clipping and the photo album!
And by the way, the protagonist is beautiful, I really like these dolls 🙂 .
October 18, 2016 at 7:49 am
The Daisy doll makes me happy whenever I see her. She has such a sweet, carefree expression.
June 26, 2017 at 8:37 am
Such fun! I love it 😀
June 26, 2017 at 8:49 am
Thanks! It was fun to make 🙂