Go here to read this episode: MDA 07: Daisy and the mysterious photos
First shoe dropped. The second shoe will drop next month when Daisy meets a mysterious stranger and her adventure begins in full.
I’ve avoided using words within the story, but the central mystery is complex enough that I finally had to throw a few of them in there.
One wall I’m now banging up against is that I really want something more like a comic book format where you can easily add small panels together and define the flow in a more naturalistic way. I’m just accepting that that’s one skill too many at the moment, but it seems to be what the adventure needs to be less clunky in the storytelling.
A question to those that are following. Did today’s adventure make sense? Does it make clear where Daisy’s journey is going to take her?